Forgiveness
Sweet, sweet forgiveness:
Hanging on the boughs of need,
So fickle in her true expression,
For without love enough she contains no worth
And with love overmuch, shame masks her pretty face.
Hand in hand she walks with retribution,
A lover's lane winding through an orchard,
The fruit of which is salty, for no trees are these
That offer up their valued wares:
They are only a living graveyard of persons wronged.
Forgiveness, yet:
She may be begged, or bought, or maybe derived
From the clinging of one victim to the criminal
Who, even in wrongness, is intermingled so with the former
That pride-wound becomes but a necessary trade for peace.
A promise she becomes, when given,
So even when jealousy stabs most unbearably,
Or anger wrenches a quick-tempered heart,
She whispers cool reminders into a reddened ear,
Of calmness, and patience, and acceptance.
Hanging on the boughs of need,
So fickle in her true expression,
For without love enough she contains no worth
And with love overmuch, shame masks her pretty face.
Hand in hand she walks with retribution,
A lover's lane winding through an orchard,
The fruit of which is salty, for no trees are these
That offer up their valued wares:
They are only a living graveyard of persons wronged.
Forgiveness, yet:
She may be begged, or bought, or maybe derived
From the clinging of one victim to the criminal
Who, even in wrongness, is intermingled so with the former
That pride-wound becomes but a necessary trade for peace.
A promise she becomes, when given,
So even when jealousy stabs most unbearably,
Or anger wrenches a quick-tempered heart,
She whispers cool reminders into a reddened ear,
Of calmness, and patience, and acceptance.


6 Comments:
That's pretty good...did you already have this written or did you write it recently?
I just wrote it spontaneously yesterday so I would have something to post. Also, you challenged me and I thought I had it in me.
Oh, well, didn't exactly mean for it to be a challenge, but hey, it worked out in the end.
Whoa...I didn't realize that, I am blind. Makes you (at least me) wonder why they are female? I don't want to sound rude or anything, just curious.
(I can see "revenge" as male, but hey, not my writings.)
Revenge couldn't be male. Revenge is too conniving to be male. Forgiveness, could be genderless, or it could be female, but definitely not male. Come to think of it, Materialism was female, too. What would be male? Greed. War. Conservatism. Frugality. Order.
I'm not sure, I guess war could be male, I can actually see greed as female, though I can't really say I know.
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